Monday, November 17, 2014

TV or internet

TV ads are better because when the program is finished you will see this ad and parents don’t have to worry that will pop up on internet random things just pop up on the screen

Television prices are low the television play by the rules  when the program is finished you  will see an ad.  This gives you lots of choices about the time you can advertise.  If you want the children to see your ad, you can advertise it during the children's programmes.

There are rules about what you can advertise on TV.   The internet don’t play by the rules because they let you skip the ad in five seconds.  This is no help if you want people to see your ads.  They just skip them all.   The tv ads don’t they show important stuff we need to know at the perfect time.

Advertising on TV would be the best idea for your product.  It is safer because there are rules about advertising on TV that will protect the viewers.  We want your product to be popular and this is the best way to advertise it.

Thursday, October 23, 2014

Using equal addition

equal.pngWrite a word problem to show when this would be a good strategy to use.

Hugh had $487 he spent all the money on a new car I had $252 on a motor bike for my dad

+13    +13


Using place value

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Make an explain everything on the ipad about how to use this strategy.


My Blood story

When I was younger I went to my other nans house to stay the weekend.  On Saturday my papa told me to grab the butcher knife so he could cut something.  I went into the kitchen and took the large butcher knife.   I decided to play with it I chucked it around and started to test if it was sharp by running the knife along my hand.   But I pushed down too hard and I cut my hand diagonally the blood was dripping down my hand I ran and said look there’s blood on my hand Nan.

Nan told me to wait in the kitchen until she  gets a plaster for me.The blood was dripping on the kitchen floor. I told nan to hurry up she took for ever. After 10 minutes she finally came into the kitchen with my plaster she put it on straight away and put a  bandage on my hand. The cat and dog licked the blood off the floor  that dripped off my hand.

Wednesday, September 24, 2014

optimist yachting week

on Monday I went optimist yachting with room 21 and my class room 10 went first on the kayak I was nearly last then I came last when I went under the bridge my paddle hit the bridge once then I crashed into the rocks miss Hill was waiting for me then she saw me around the corner and then I crashed into two boats then I got told to wait by one of the boats that I crashed into and then I got bored then I jumped off my kayak because I was bored everyone said did you capsize I keep on saying no I jumped off my kayak.

the next day I missed the bus and I went with room 11 to optimist yachting room 11 left at half past twelve my buddy was Dylan harmer we were going fast but we did not turn because we did not realise our rudder or tiller was not down then we got told that and then we started to really slow down because we couldn't turn it sucked finally I got some wind and then I went back to shore and then everyone went kayaking we went kayaking to the other bridge instead of the bridge that goes to boats and we went for a little swim I was having a race with Boston dad called Nathan I wasted him by miles wow maybe not by miles because of the current was rough most of the room 7 people got stuck underneath bridge.

on Wednesday I was buddies with Jared it fun going on the kayaks together because we touched all the buoys in the water it took us forever to touch the white buoy we had turn three times and then we went back to shore because I ask a parent if they wanted go yachting with me so he said yes but we didn't have any wind  but we also didn't have the right balance because we were about to sink or capsize and like ten minutes more  Mr Ford asked me if I had rid a yacht by my self I said no I haven’t before so I had a go it was real fun going faster than ever first I wanted to go fast and then fast as than Mrs Roil say good boy Jt I started to go faster and then I made a u turn  and nearly capsize so I learn over to starboard and I went back to normal and two parents said time to go because they both had enough  miss Hill said stay out guys then Jared in room 10 crashes into me twice and Luke and I were going real fast then I make another u turn and started to go on a angle all the way back to shore I nearly capsize like five times in a row then the next minute Jared comes again  and crashes into me oh no I was about to park into the gap that was there then I got into shore to change my clothes after that I said my self that was so awesome.

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Tuesday, September 16, 2014

optimist yachting

Yesterday I went optimist yachting with room 21 and my class room 10 went first on the kayak I was nearly last then I came last when I went under the bridge my paddle hit the bridge once then I crashed into the rocks miss Hill was waiting for me then she saw me around the corner and then crashed into two boats then I got told to wait by one of the boats that I crashed into and then I got bored the I jumped off my kayak because I was bored everyone said did you capsize I keep on saying no I just fell off.  

Thursday, June 12, 2014

The monster house

This book explains about the monster house because I was trying to let the audience know that it was set in the city. The season is winter and the tree has no leaf’s and the chimney has smoke coming out nobody's going outside to play.  Who will be attracted to read this book?

The idea behind my illustration was a house that looked normal but its really a monster.  A reader could tell this by looking closely at the picture.  It has a crack in the door and the colours I have used are dark and dull. They make the picture look mysterious and spooky.

The title describes what the book is about.  The letters in the title look like bones which makes the reader think that the book might be about bones.  The colour of the letters is red which makes the reader think of blood and meat.
I put the letters at the top of the page and made them bright so they stands out.  When titles stand out and the letters aren't blocking the picture, the reader can see what the book is about.

I think people that are seven and over should read this book because it’s not suitable for younger people because they might get scared.  If the reader is over seven they will like this book because.

Wednesday, April 16, 2014


The forty coats man

Author by andrea  torrey balsara

This book is about a girl that goes for a little bike ride.  And hears someone shouting  out to her and a man with forty coats throws something over the pigpen.  Then Mrs Archie thinks forty coats poisoned her pigs.    

A strength of this book is that forty coats strength is being honest and friendly.  Weakness is Mrs Archie.

I think this story is very interesting and fun to read about. I can identify with the main character because I have been to the the back of the shed that Jerri looks around.  

Friday, March 28, 2014

my buddy

my buddy is jaedyon coombs

he likes playing on his tablet and likes to with his lego

he like rugby his favorite team is all blacks and wants to be like dan carter


Thursday, March 27, 2014

my report about kiwis

Kiwis are members of the bird family and they cannot fly.  The kiwi cannot fly because it’s wings are too small to lifts its body into the air.  It has no tail. It has loose hair.
They inhabit underneath hollow trees where they lay the eggs in nest.  Kiwis are often out at night time. Kiwis are similar to other birds that can fly.  They are similar in the way that they have a beak and wings.  They eat insects and grubs like other bids do.

The kiwis have muscular strong legs.  They use these legs to walk and to fight.  They don’t fly so their legs get all the exercise.  They use their beaks to get their food by sniffing and digging with them.  Their nostril   is in their beak.

Kiwis are protected by people because they struggle to live.   They have lots of predators like ferrets, possums, cats and dogs.     They are often born in places that are surrounded by special fences to protect them before they are put in the bush.

Kiwis are strong birds but need our help to survive.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        

Tuesday, March 18, 2014

playing hard

When rugby tackle training is on my team and the coach do tackle ball rush to warm up. Then we start to do burpees , push ups ,star jumps and pull ups which I'm not good at it I try my best at them. When the  coach puts the cones out  in a diamond around the field. The team has a race against each other and then we have to buddy up and try hold each other like a baby. I like to finish of with a game that is called ball tag. I like winning.

Wednesday, March 12, 2014

the explore

 My person is Sir Edmund Hillary He Is famous for climbing  mount Everest

and is well known.

Sir Edmund Hillary was born in Auckland the July 1919 he also died in 11th January 2008 he died the age of eighty eight  and had a son called peter and grow up in Auckland. was born in 19545

discovered that his boots had frozen solid outside the tent. He spent two hours warming them before he and Tensing attempted the final ascent wearing 30 pounds 14 kg packs.
Sir Edmund Hillary was famous for climbing the summit of mount Everest


Thursday, February 20, 2014


My connection for my computer had turned off.  I needed my computer online so I could write my story about kindness boomerang.  Without a connection I wouldn't be able to write my story.  Hamish helped me fix it by refreshing the connection.  I asked him to help me and he didn't hesitate.  Hamish is a kind, helpful friend.

helping other people
When I helped Mrs England asked me  to do a job for her nicely and I said yes then I moved them into room 13 then Mrs Lowe asked me to do job for her to moved some board games to room 11.

Monday, February 17, 2014

dear diary

Dear diary I was happy that Ivan came to school with me while I was so shy that I wouldn't talk till the the next day came it is great having a lovely teacher and such awesome friends the best thing in room 4 was the haoma petting zoo and the amazing maze.

Wednesday, February 12, 2014

moment in time

I heard waves smashing.
I heard people screaming.
I saw two baby sharks dead.
I saw people falling off the board.
I felt my heart pounding as I started to stand up

I felt my feet on the surfboard.